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The time is coming, policies will spoil,
Soilders start gunning ,for war of oil,
Poor man's fight, rich man's war,
Hit the lights, they want more,
Scared like sh**,covered in blood & piss,
Can't change it, too young for congress,
Bodies all mutilated, just like Vietnam,
Reporters decapitated, i'll be da**ed,
Hide like a chamelion, until you get a command,
Kill all the civilians, cut off all hands,
Leave none alive, were the good guys,
You must survive, until you ask why,
Go as long as you can, enimies you must smother
You will be a real man, until you cry for mother
Bodies been dead for awhile, there getting rotter,
However continue the pile, continue the slaughter,
Enemies will all be massacred, cities must be neutralized,
Compassion for them mustn't occur, trust only your allies,
Your life must be sacrificed, for stupid white mens power,
Life in the army will suffice, until your final hour,
Butcher, Annihilate, suffocate, we won't tell if you won't,
Don't let them have checkmate, better make sure you don't
No point in this war, it's all a crock,
If your not for, then suck Bush's co**                      
©2004-2009 ~The-Prez
:iconthe-prez:

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A funny outlook on war.

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:icontwisted-end:
I really like this piece, and your writing style. The message is good, I've seen alot of anti-war/Bush writings, but not like this, good job.
:icontranquilfeather:
LOL this is awesomeness. ^^ Congrats.

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We allow our ignorance to prevail upon us and make us think we can survive alone, alone in patches, alone in groups, alone in races, even alone in genders.
-- Maya Angelou--
:icongingerbreadxcoffin:
haha, i love this :+fav: for sure, i try and make fun of our country being at war anytiome i can, only because i am against it...nice work you have in yoru gallery.

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klaha thinks he's a ghost...



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peace in AMEHIKAAAH! :peace:
:iconhanginggarden66:
:roll: psh, that's pathetic. A funny outlook on war? What's so funny about saying the exact same thing a hundred other people said, with all the incessant swearing? Again I say! :roll:

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Ignorance is bliss. Why else would I be so happy all the time?
:iconthe-prez:
What's funny is why people think war is good in certain situations. A dark humor.
:iconlsyfil:
Wow.
Powerful words. Something that makes sense, shares an opinion and appeals to readers. The titles also interesting, like you said, dark humour, though at the same time serious.
As i read this, i could picture each sentence in my mind being 'played out'..
:iconthe-prez:
Yeah, at different points things probably 'shouldn't' play out. Like the horrors of war.

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Shut up and play yer guitar-Frank Zappa
:iconneurotic-flyer-69:
every word is so true, and the words fall into place so well war is dark but this poem makes me kinda laugh, and i qoute " You will be a real man, until you cry for mother" ah aint it the truth?

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always the look but never the touch
NiCoLe
:butterflytwo: ~Dead~ :butterflytwo:
:iconthe-prez:
Yes......mommy!

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Shut up and play yer guitar-Frank Zappa

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